It has really good timbre. Definitely relaxing, maybe a little generic, but good nontheless.
I envy your skills dude. Killing it as usual.
Okay, so I really like the concept, but there are serious problems in the execution for the VOCALS
All of these problems pertain to the vocals
-Sound Quality: To be blunt, the vocal recording quality is bad. I know I know, you're not made of money, but none of us are. It just would really help to have a better microphone
-Vocal Editing: I heard you click the mouse. You couldn't edit that out? Audacity is free and can do that very easily. Also
-Mixing: This would have really benefitted from some EQ and maybe even a chorus effect
As for the actual instrumental, it's really nice. Did you make it yourself or did someone else produce it? Either way, you're supposed to specify that in the description.
I made the beat myself
thank you for your input
im investing in a good mic asap
produced by Fr0z is in the description
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